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03 May 2009 @ 09:42 pm

Title: Circles
Author: DarkBlysse
Series: Applicable to all series
Word Count: 236
Rating: G
Characters: Edward, Alphonse
Summary: Alphonse wants to be just like Brother
Warnings: None (Haha, that's a bloody miracle for me! xD)


A/N: Cute ficlet is cute... xD And thanks to memory_stone  for the bunny! ^_~ Also, I placed third with it at fma_fic_contest!



Alphonse holds the small piece of chalk (un)steadily in his chubby little fingers, tongue poking out the corner of his mouth in concentration. The lines are shaky and drawn over top of his older brother's more practiced array, effectively ruining it.

Crouching behind one of the puffy, tattered armchairs in their living room is Edward, his face the perfect picture of amusement as he watches his little brother trace the lines, trying so hard to learn the pattern, to gain some more grace and skill with the chalk. He looks more determined than even Edward was at that age; he probably is, with someone he looks up to and wants to be better than all the same.

Dropping the chalk, Alphonse stumbles back a little, clapping his hands loudly and slapping them to the floor, letting out a small “ummph!” as if the noise will add more power to what he's trying to do, will heighten his chances of making it work. All that comes about from his attempted Alchemy is a small, sputtering spark that dances across the center of the haphazardly drawn circle before dying out. But that lack of reaction does nothing to curb Alphonse's ecstatic reaction.

Edward's smile widens as he sees his little brother's joy, and he walks off to go practice his own Alchemy. After all... he has to improve, so Alphonse has better circles to trace later on.


'Circles' placed third in FMA_Fic_Contest this week! \o/ Banner made by me~

Current Mood: excitedexcited
Current Music: Sonny Moore--Mora Vs. The Toxic Avenger
nochick_fics: FMA Ed and Al CoS Togethernochick_fics on May 4th, 2009 05:43 am (UTC)
That was utterly adorable!
Blysse: [Alphonse] Chudarkblysse on May 4th, 2009 09:15 am (UTC)
Thanks! ^//^
Anna: FMA - cute Ed flailing/flapping :Dkookiety on May 4th, 2009 09:41 am (UTC)
*dance dance dance*

For some reason I feel all puffed up you won! Like - hurrr - I toldja she was starting to get awesomely good with her writing! Look look and she has banner noaw!

*moar twirling and flailing*

*huggles and kisses*

I already told you I loved the ficky. I do, I do <3

Blysse: [Alphonse] Dancedarkblysse on May 4th, 2009 10:12 am (UTC)
*Dances with you!! \o/*

EEEE thanks so much, hon! >w< I'm so glad you like it! :DD

C-chan: heartsbox_of_doom on May 4th, 2009 12:31 pm (UTC)
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww <3333333333
Blysse: [Alphonse] Heartdarkblysse on May 4th, 2009 08:10 pm (UTC)
^//^; <3~
arwen_aileon_sarwen_aileon_s on May 4th, 2009 06:05 pm (UTC)
It's amazing!!! I'm very happy you won third place!!

Great great fic, very cute and adorable!!
Blysse: [Edward] Chudarkblysse on May 4th, 2009 08:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks, hon! ^//^
Angelbaroqueangel on May 4th, 2009 06:36 pm (UTC)
Congrats, deffinately well deserved XD

The fic is adorably cute :P
Blysse: [Alphonse] Cute 4darkblysse on May 4th, 2009 08:11 pm (UTC)
Bwee, thanks! >w< <3
hotomihotomi on May 4th, 2009 10:59 pm (UTC)
Blysse: [Alphonse] Heartdarkblysse on May 5th, 2009 12:03 am (UTC)
Thanks! <3
colonel_alquicolonel_alqui on May 4th, 2009 11:46 pm (UTC)
This is too cute, and wonderfully written. Great job. <3
Blysse: [Alphonse] Happydarkblysse on May 5th, 2009 12:04 am (UTC)
Thank you! ^^
Kristi Lynnalanna214 on May 5th, 2009 02:53 am (UTC)
So cute!! ^_^ Chibi!Al is adorable. Congrats on the win. :)
Blysse: [Alphonse] Chudarkblysse on May 5th, 2009 03:30 am (UTC)
Thanks, hon ^^
Rain Shine: shmileraynshyne on May 5th, 2009 03:37 am (UTC)
Aww! <3 What a cute little fanfic!
Blyssedarkblysse on May 5th, 2009 03:55 am (UTC)
Thanks. ^//^; <3~
maksou: pedohugmaksou on December 29th, 2009 05:05 pm (UTC)
That was freaking adorible. I just love stories about the elric boys when they were young. <3
Blysse: [Elricest] Brothersdarkblysse on December 29th, 2009 08:10 pm (UTC)
Thank you :D